Monday, May 12, 2008

Letter to Susan Davis

[Your Name]
Student
High Tech Middle Media Arts
Your Address
[City, ST ZIP Code]
May 2, 2008

Susan Davis (San Diego) or Bob Filner (Chula Vista) or Brian Billbray (Del Mar and North)
Representative 53rd District
[Street Address]
[City, ST ZIP Code]


Dear [Recipient Name]:
I am writing to……MAKE A CASE FOR RENEWABLE ENERGY! URGE SUSAN DAVIS TO INTRODUCE NEW LEGISLATION!!!!

Things to include in a persuasive letter/ piece:
1. Introduce yourself (grade, school, where you live, why you are important)
2. Start out positive. Thank the representative for what she has done so far…

http://www.house.gov/susandavis/

3. Make a STRONG case for renewable energy (talk about dangers of not using renewable energy, and the benefits of switching)
4. Organize your writing (divide it up perhaps by argument…ie. Paragraph #1 is on the economic benefits of renewable energy, #2 political, #3 Social)
5. Be persuasive!!! (pull on her heartstrings…paint a picture of what may happen to future generations)
6. Post writing to blog so that myself and others can edit it before sending
Any other ideas? _________________________________________________________

Sincerely,
[Your Name]

Thursday, May 8, 2008

Thoughts on Nature

I wrote this at 6th grade camp two days ago. Enjoy. :)

A gentle breeze sweeps across my face
As the sun beats down my back
In the distance an endless cloud covering
Stretching into the great unkown

Stillness, so hard to find
My thoughts are racing

Away from the hustling and bustling of fast life
Time moves slowly, almost stops

Nature greets me, the happy host of a tranquil party
Providing none of the banal distractions of her restless sister,
Technology

While technology wines and dines,
Providing short term pleasure
It is nature that offers sustaining peace

And this is what my heart longs for

Perhaps I have found it, or perhaps not
What I do know is that we are now one
Joining in union our underlying core

I belong no more to her, than she to I
We are interdependent and carefree
At least for a little while...